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There was this weird weightless feeling looming over me. It felt as if I was frozen in time. I felt like I was falling, and yet, I was flying. The airplane engine was noisy and there was a persistently screaming child, sitting in front of me. At moments, it was as if we were going to come crashing down. I had asked several times for the lady behind me, on her cell phone, to please shut up. She ignored me and continued talking. I stayed in my seat, with my seat belt tightened, and a ‘Snack Mix’ in my hand. I kept eating the mini pretzels and cheddar bits, however there was still food in the tiny silver bag.
I had asked the flight attendant for some water but she never gave it to me. I was sitting in a row of three, alone. The flight didn't have many people on it at all. In fact, it was mostly empty. I had noticed that one of the ladies on the plane had a tattoo of an angel on her right ankle. There was no angel that could save her now.
Suddenly the plane went crashing down towards the ground. I smiled. I had been dead for many years...was another plane crash going to hurt?
©2007-2009 ~Hiddencrying
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I was in an airplane on my way to Florida, when I wrote this!

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Very nice :] I'm writing a similair story.. well it's about a girl on a plane who sees this ghost outside the plane during a storm.. but only she can see it. It's for school so I'm not very into it... but this story you wrote helped :D

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here is what I have so far.. any tips? First draft is due tmrw... ick.


Sandy looked out the planes window to see another strike of lightning crash down. She quickley turned her back on the window. She hated thunder storms AND flying. She curled up in the warm blanket the flight attendant had given her and the other passangers. Looking over at her older brother, Jackson, she saw he was fast asleep. "How could anyone sleep through this storm?" She wondered.

About a half-hour later, Sandy was still wide awake. She still had her back to the window, too afraid to look at the storm that could crash down this plane at any minute. The pilot said there was nothing to worry about, but she had a bad feeling. Suddenly, she felt this weird weightless feeling looming over her. [your line, sorry ^^; it's the only one I used.. it just sounded perfect for this.]

all I have so far... :[ It's 730 and this is due TOMORROW! At the end of class... but still. ahhh! well it's the first draft.. so nothing big, i guess.

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Ichigo...and...Rukia? HELL YEAH!
Join the IchiRuki club today :D :hug:
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Thanks! ^^ I wrote it while I was on a plane so my parents kind of got mad...=P

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:flame:If you don’t think I'm stupid enough to light my own house on fire, you just have to be dumb enough to hand me the book of matches.
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Well it sounds fine. I try not to use names while writing a short horror story, but it's good.

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:flame:If you don’t think I'm stupid enough to light my own house on fire, you just have to be dumb enough to hand me the book of matches.

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